Revision Work Intro

      I have revised the "What's In My Wallet" blog assignment, because this was when this English 101 course has just started so I wasn't very clear on how to do things, but now I realize that I performed weak on that assignment and I want to re-do it. Mostly what I did wrong about this is I didn't read the assignment instructions on angel. I saw an announcement that we have to make a blog post discussing what is in our wallet, so I just went straight to that. In this assignment we were supposed to talk about our wallets and what would someone think of us if they were to find our wallet based on the contents inside. I have failed to answer a few questions that went along with this assignment such as: "If all they had to go on is your wallet, what would people miss or be unable to know about you." After revising this assignment, it sounds much better and more complete. I have answered the questions that were originally instructed. I also expended this paper more, to keep the audience more interested in a way I could.